Poesía improvisada

Un pequeño poema, sin retocar, escrito de forma completamente improvisada.

Trusted, was I a lost kid, in an unwanted moment,
lonely lived I, lonely loved I
my laughs seldom came, my tears provoqued no coment
lonely, surrounded by ghostly minds.
As life approached to manhood,
changes were made, not outside
thoughts borrowed from atypic minds
covered my eyes, like a black hood.
Listed was I, as one not to trust
for my words were always far from yours
but my tongue was true, and my thoughts pure
in my life, i lived without you.

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